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The fallen, the ravished, the decimated. These are the works that have knelt before me and the might of scathing criticism that I command!
A little explanation is needed as to why I have been rather late with my attempted weekly updates. The thing is, I did write it, on time and everything. I just came to a decision that what I did write needed to be reworked and that I liked it better later in the story. So after finishing chapters 2 and 3 I decided to put them aside for a later date and do a new chapter 2. As of yesterday I was just about finished my new chapter 2 and had it prepared for my usual weekend update. Unfortunately there was computer error and I lost all but the first 500 words or so of it. So I'm back to square one on that piece. Hopefully I can have it up soon.

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Jaykob Storey
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Canada
I'm an aspiring writer with a meagre list of professional works under his belt and many years of amateur writing in the bank. I've written a few unpublished novels and I'm currently focused on producing more content so as to grow as a writer.

I primarily consider myself a fantasy writer and humorist.
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:iconjennystokes:
jennystokes Dec 19, 2013  Professional General Artist
Happy Birthday Jaykob.
Big hugs
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Great-Lord-Dread Dec 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you, I appreciate it.
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jennystokes Dec 21, 2013  Professional General Artist
:)
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Metarex12 Dec 19, 2013  Student General Artist
Happy Birthday!
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Great-Lord-Dread Dec 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks
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TheLibertasLeague Dec 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks for joining EpicMuse!
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Great-Lord-Dread Dec 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah sure. An interesting little group you've got there.
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TheLibertasLeague Dec 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Lol thanks C:
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:iconlunaticofsilence:
Ok, this time I actually tried harder and tried to edit a poem.
I tried, but I know am stuck because I'm not sure what I'm doing wrong. Can you please critique my poem "Something died in me tonight EDITED

I made an edited an unedited version.
I tried to make it more coherent, but I'm not sure if it is or not. I am also not completely sure what I'm doing wrong.

Thank you very much for your time. As always, I understand that you are busy, and you don't have to critique it immediately, or at all.

The poem contains symbolism that I explained in the unedited version.

Pixel Rose Thank you. :seriousbow:
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Great-Lord-Dread Nov 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah, yeah, no problem. I'll definitely give it a look when I have time. 
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